There once was a childless woman
who longed for a baby to care for. The people in the village up above always
brought her meat and blubber, but this day was different. The wife of one of
the hunters approached the woman and asked her if she would like to foster a
bear cub. The woman could not have been more delighted. She went out to get the
bear cub and brought him into her home to help him get warm. She fed the bear
cub and loved him as her own child, even letting him sleep with her at night.
As the bear got older, his body grew bigger, but his mind grew too. Since he
had had so much human interaction with the woman, he had developed a human-like
mind, being able to communicate with his foster mother.
Polar Bear Cub, online source
The
village children would play with the bear, and he would be as gentle as he
could. Eventually though, he got too big to play with the children, so the
adults would play with him. Everyone in the village loved the bear.
Unfortunately, the bear soon grew too big for even the grown men to play with
him. They did not want the bear to feel left out, so they began inviting the
bear on their hunting outings. He helped the men find seal and kept them well-fed.
The foster mother even made him a necklace of sinew to distinguish him from the
other bears, so he would not be hunted himself.
Polar Bear, online source
The
bear’s foster mother had always told him to never harm a human unless that
human wished to harm him. So, when the bear returned late one night with the
dead body of a man, his mother knew that her bear had only been protecting
himself. The body turned out to belong to a man from another village who had
heard of the bear that should not be killed, and people had heard him vow to
kill him if he saw it. The bear’s foster mother knew that her baby could not
stay with her any longer though. He would be killed if he did.
Sad Polar Bear, online source
So one
day, early in the morning before the sun came up, the mother prepared to send
her baby off into the world. She told him that there were others bears like him
who would take him in, but she really had no clue if this was the case. The two
held each other and wept; they were both heartbroken. The old woman finally
decided that it was time, and she sent the bear off to find a family of his
own. The bear searched for what seemed like forever until he finally found
them. Other bears. Just like him. He approached them timidly, but they welcomed
him as if they had known him his whole life. Mother was right. The bears
recognized him, and they had known his bear mother who was killed by hunters.
He told them of his life with the woman and the villagers, and they were all in
awe. He lived with them and was happy, but he missed his foster mother
terribly.
Polar Bears, online source
His
foster mother missed him too. So, one day, she asked to join the hunters on
their outing with hopes that she could catch a glimpse of her baby. The hunters
from her village no longer hunted bears, but they did come across them from
time to time. A couple of hours into the outing, the foster mother began to
lose hope. But then, she saw him. Her baby! She knew it was him because he was
still wearing his sinew necklace. He showed his foster mother his new family. He now had cubs of his own! The
visit did not last long, but the woman left satisfied and filled with happiness
for her baby, and the bear was so excited to have gotten to see his foster
mother again.
Polar Bear and Cubs, online source
Here ends this story.
Bibliography: The Woman Who Had a Bear as a Foster-Son from Eskimo Folk Tales by Knud Rasmussen, link to online source
Bibliography: The Woman Who Had a Bear as a Foster-Son from Eskimo Folk Tales by Knud Rasmussen, link to online source
Author’s Note: I did not change the original story much. I
really liked the original and thought it was a sweet story. The original story
gave more detail in the beginning of the story, but I wrote my version
differently for fear of copying too much of the original story. However, I did make
some changes to the end of the story. In the original story, the bear leaves,
and the two never see each other again. This
was too sad an ending for me. Also, the original story never tells us if the
bear found a bear family after leaving his foster mother. So, I decided to give
the characters a happy ending and give the readers some closure. I also chose
to include the detail of the hunters in that village no longer hunting for
bears because it didn’t make sense to me that they could have such a familial
relationship with a bear but still kill others of his kind. I thought it was
important to include the reunion because the original story left me with so
many questions, and I really wanted to know if the two would ever see each
other again and if the bear would be happy out there since he had grown up with
humans. My first and last lines were modeled after the Inuit stories as well.
Lillie, what a nice story. I thought at one point the bear was going to grow old and his instincts would kick in and he’d accidentally kill someone. But I was wrong obviously. I liked that you rewrote the ending and wrote in a reunion, because the mother and bear not ever seeing each other again just didn’t seem fair! Great job! I really enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteI love how you added closure to the original story! Too many times I've seen stories leaving me with more questions I had than when I came in and it's a bit frustrating, haha. The idea of a domesticated bear is amusing, and I kind of pictured the bear acting like a dog halfway through the story. Setting up the sinew necklace for the ending was done nicely too.
ReplyDeleteHi Lillie, I really enjoyed reading your story! I'm so glad that the bear found a home and a mother and that the woman found a baby for herself. At first, because of the photos, I thought that the woman was a bear. But I like that she is human and the bear became humanlike. The use of multiple photos was really nice! Way to go above and beyond the original requirements.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story! I thought it was really creative and cute. I liked the bond between the mother and her bear cub, I thought that it was sweet. I also liked that the village welcomed the bear as one of their own and let him be a part of their family. It was sad that the bear couldn’t stay with his mother forever though, at least he was able to find other bears like him in the end!
ReplyDeleteFirst off, I love the title of your story. I love animals, especially furry ones and so I couldn't help but be excited for this story even before I actually started reading it. You started this story off great. I think it's so sad that she was longing for a child. I'm glad she finally got her child! Nice job with your story!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a weird story. Cute, as very sweet, but weird nonetheless. You did a good job with it though. I love how you gave it a happy ending. I agree with you, its nice to know that the bear had a happy ending and also was able to see his 'mother' again. I would have like it slightly more if you had explained why the village men decided to keep the bear cub... but it was fun to read regardless.
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